Hi Leah-Maree, I enjoy this activity as I love Shakespeare and find Shakespeare English very entertaining especially when it is modern English translated. I like that you translated your own story rather than the ones provided and you did a very good job with the translations as they are mostly accurate. Shakespeare English makes everything sound more poetic and dramatic like “his visage hath changed emotions v'ry apace” sounds so poetic when really it is a very simple sentence. Did you use an app for your translations? Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates Manaiakalani commenter.
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Hi Leah-Maree,
ReplyDeleteI enjoy this activity as I love Shakespeare and find Shakespeare English very entertaining especially when it is modern English translated. I like that you translated your own story rather than the ones provided and you did a very good job with the translations as they are mostly accurate. Shakespeare English makes everything sound more poetic and dramatic like “his visage hath changed emotions v'ry apace” sounds so poetic when really it is a very simple sentence. Did you use an app for your translations?
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
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