Hi Leah-Maree, This is a very entertaining story and fits in well with the Christmas season, I imagine this is exactly what would happen if Santa did hire colorblind elves! Great job with getting to over 10 sentences and I enjoy reading your stories. Keep up the great work! Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates Manaiakalani commenter.
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Hi Leah-Maree,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very entertaining story and fits in well with the Christmas season, I imagine this is exactly what would happen if Santa did hire colorblind elves! Great job with getting to over 10 sentences and I enjoy reading your stories. Keep up the great work!
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Manaiakalani commenter.
Hi Zana
ReplyDeleteThank you for the compliment on my work but I can't take all the credit it was my sister who came up with the theme for this little story.
Hi Leah-Maree,
DeleteShe came up with a great theme then and you wrote it really well. Maybe you could collaborate on more stories in the future.
Hi Zana
DeleteThant is a great idea I will see what she thinks of it.